These two scratches are noticeable, so I'd like them fixed.
Literal
This 2-places [gen-の] scratch [topic-は] conspicuous [because-ので] fix-[want-て欲しい] [copula-です].
２箇所 uses the counter 箇所 for 'places/spots.' 目立つ 'to stand out / be conspicuous' is an intransitive verb. ~て欲しいです 'I want (you) to X' is the standard pattern for requesting action from someone — polite but somewhat direct.